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29. The First One First

085. Two first accounts stop before payment
085. Two first accounts stop before payment

The paired accounts share a date boundary and describe incompatible actions.

First account: renewsFirst account: does not renew
Shared particularsFifty-three; wife dead eleven yearsFifty-three; wife dead eleven years
Morning or meetingInterest in the removed tree, then corrected tenseA woman offers her hand; his hands stay in his pockets
Stopping pointBefore the ninth; money still hisBefore the ninth; money still his

His later written intention to renew does not show a completed renewal or settle which account he originally gave.

086. Cutting the page does not cut everything
086. Cutting the page does not cut everything

Four kinds of text receive four different material treatments.

Text or objectTreatmentWhat remains
Boxed comfort statementsLeft alone as trueBoth first accounts can contain them
Laugh questionLeaf folded over the woman's passageThe stranger's answer is made adjacent to her
School-gate passageThree lines cut out and swallowedA slot through which the receipts remain visible
Third accountSigned and placed underneathThe other two accounts remain above it

The story shows changes to this copy and a signed intention, not the removal of a woman or alteration of the city.

087. The index redirects the question
087. The index redirects the question

Links inside the coverless book; destinations are not confirmations of identity.

The book's index
Consulted to find which account he gave
The preceding woman's account
Sees four years of his receipts; he has eleven
REFUSAL
The word he wants to learn
REINSTATEMENT
The index's destination from refusal
A third first account
No page number; begins with his request for the book

Relationships

  • The book's index → The preceding woman's account: sends him to
  • The book's index → REFUSAL: entry consulted
  • REFUSAL → REINSTATEMENT: redirects to
  • The book's index → A third first account: contains without a page

The index offers another account where he asks which account was his.