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29. The First One First
The paired accounts share a date boundary and describe incompatible actions.
| First account: renews | First account: does not renew | |
|---|---|---|
| Shared particulars | Fifty-three; wife dead eleven years | Fifty-three; wife dead eleven years |
| Morning or meeting | Interest in the removed tree, then corrected tense | A woman offers her hand; his hands stay in his pockets |
| Stopping point | Before the ninth; money still his | Before the ninth; money still his |
His later written intention to renew does not show a completed renewal or settle which account he originally gave.
Four kinds of text receive four different material treatments.
| Text or object | Treatment | What remains |
|---|---|---|
| Boxed comfort statements | Left alone as true | Both first accounts can contain them |
| Laugh question | Leaf folded over the woman's passage | The stranger's answer is made adjacent to her |
| School-gate passage | Three lines cut out and swallowed | A slot through which the receipts remain visible |
| Third account | Signed and placed underneath | The other two accounts remain above it |
The story shows changes to this copy and a signed intention, not the removal of a woman or alteration of the city.
Links inside the coverless book; destinations are not confirmations of identity.
- The book's index
- Consulted to find which account he gave
- The preceding woman's account
- Sees four years of his receipts; he has eleven
- REFUSAL
- The word he wants to learn
- REINSTATEMENT
- The index's destination from refusal
- A third first account
- No page number; begins with his request for the book
Relationships
- The book's index → The preceding woman's account: sends him to
- The book's index → REFUSAL: entry consulted
- REFUSAL → REINSTATEMENT: redirects to
- The book's index → A third first account: contains without a page
The index offers another account where he asks which account was his.