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30. Retention
Opening and closing balances, with their calculated difference in the same unit.
words of proven retention
| Item | Value | Detail |
|---|---|---|
| Opening estate | 162 | Amount written on the form |
| After eight hearings | 141 | Closing amount; the form records failure |
| Difference, calculated | 21 | 162 minus 141; not a separately quoted fee |
Twenty-one is 162 minus 141. The story does not itemize how each hearing contributes to that difference.
Three verbal resources enter the assessment under different conditions.
| Resource | His relation to it | Treatment |
|---|---|---|
| Meral's book | Something familiar lowers his shoulders | Meral asks that it stay out of the charges; auditor draws a line |
| Test sentence | Cannot hear the ending; accepts a rereading | Both readings billed |
| Eleven thousand play lines | Offers remembered lines and cues | Authors' estate provision; his license ended with the run |
Failure to hear an ending is not proof that he has forgotten it. The rereading is nevertheless billed.
The ticket moves in narrative order, accompanied by a line he performs.
- Ticket brought to the test
- Row F is legible; it has its own coat pocket.
- His performed line is written down
- The auditor asks; he marks a breath.
- The ticket is returned to him
- He puts it on her copy of the line.
- A copy is declined
- He watches both originals go into the file.
- His hand enters the flat pocket
- He later asks which entrance is his tonight.
Relationships
- Ticket brought to the test → His performed line is written down: then
- His performed line is written down → The ticket is returned to him: then
- The ticket is returned to him → A copy is declined: then
- A copy is declined → His hand enters the flat pocket: then
Both objects enter the file. The status of the man and the door he takes remain unresolved.