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42. Errata
The composing service changes what can count as agreement.
| Proposed wording | Widow's response | Next use |
|---|---|---|
| His agreement is retained | Crosses it out; he was already dying | Correction returned to composing service |
| He would have agreed | Says he would not; asks to ask him | Husband's voice reads proposed agreement |
| I asked for him | Objects to its position | Service places her wording beneath renewal |
These are proposed textual corrections inside Errata; they do not rewrite the other stories' events.
Actions at the kitchen table, in narrative order.
- Proposed agreement
- The clerk connects her husband's voice.
- No, then yes
- It gives each answer when she requests it.
- The remembered breath
- She asks to hear that small breath again.
- Renewal wording
- She objects to where her words were placed.
- Disconnect offered
- The clerk offers to turn off the speaker.
- Signature
- She signs and asks for lower volume.
Relationships
- Proposed agreement → No, then yes: directed answers
- No, then yes → The remembered breath: a sound recalled
- The remembered breath → Renewal wording: wording relocated
- Renewal wording → Disconnect offered: clerk's response
- Disconnect offered → Signature: narrative order
The voice's ability to answer both ways does not establish the dead husband's agreement.
Material actions remain beside their official descriptions.
| What remains in the room | What the record can say | |
|---|---|---|
| The hand | No physical alteration required | Its action is assigned to instructions |
| The mark | Attempted removal enlarges it | Classified as domestic salt water; retained |
| The visit | One signature required before he leaves | Recast as corrections the widow requested |
| The book | She keeps this copy uncorrected | Signed request for a corrected edition on file |
The final file claim does not certify voluntary consent or a corrected physical copy.